The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
<span>The correct answer is b. The sea calmed, but no boats left shore. Option a is incorrect because there are unnecessary commas between the noun and its verb ("sea, calmed" and "boats, left"). Option c is incorrect because when using a semi colon, the phrases on both sides of it should be able to stand alone. While "the sea calmed" can work by itself, "but no boats, left shore" cannot, thus rendering the semi colon incorrect. Additionally, there is an unnecessary comma between the noun "boats" and the verb "left." Finally, option d is incorrect because there should be a comma before the conjunction "but."</span>
The storm changes Sydney’s perspective on her life and the things and people around her. Before she only thought of the negatives aspects of her house and doesn’t appreciate has. The storm threatens to take all of that away, which prompts a retrospective moment from Sydney. She realizes that she should be thankful for the house she has and the family that loves her.
Answer:
If it was my first flight I would literally be nervous and excited too. On the day before the travel to space, while I'm sleeping I would imagine all the planets or what all will I see and I will imagine of shoting pictures.I would prepare by keeping all the stuff I needed and keeping myself practised and ready.
Answer:
B. States an opinion
Explanation:
A) is incorrect you want to save that for the very end when you restate your thesis in conclusion.
C) is incorrect. You support your topic sentences in your middle body paragraphs.
D) is incorrect because your answers to any questions should and will be in the BODY of your essay not your very beginning statement.
