(1) Producers of reality shows are being smart, not unethical, when they give their "actors” scripts to follow. (2) If producers
had to follow everyone around waiting for an exciting event to occur, they would never make their deadlines to produce the episodes. (3) Therefore, scripted reality shows reflect efficient planning, not sheer deceit. (4) Furthermore, the scripts do not change the fact that the shows are based on the real lives of the "actors.” (5) For example, if a reality show were about an interior decorator, the producer would never give the decorator a script related to running a restaurant. (6) The producer would, of course, always create scripts that related to decorating. Which revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph?
adding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2
moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph
adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4
using an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5
The revision that would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph is moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph
Explanation:
Moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph would make a summary of the paragraph, which will be the best way to finish it, besides the other options are not possible since it is not necessary to add facts to sentence 2, sentence 4 already has a transition word and, using analogies to describe a restaurant does not give necessary or related information to the paragraph.
