well one time when I was in paradise was when I was at the beach. I seen a bunch of people dancing. Then we went an got some surfboards. Then I went back to the beach and we surfed with some professionals that is when I learned how to surf. While I was at the beach there was lots of things to do we even had our own instructor and he was really nice and made us feel like we was at home living the dream then we left the beach and I wanted to go back so badly but I know we had to leave because we had to go back home that is one time when I felt in paradise.
basically your describing what time you loved the most and adding key details to your favorite place that you felt something special so like add some fun things that you did there.
Explanation:
just use your key details and write a good 9 line paragraph its that easy just use my idea and add some things that you would do at the beach.
