Question

Read the passage below, looking for the following 5 mistakes. Rewrite the paragraph, making the necessary revisions so that the paragraph has correct grammar. 1 - fragement, 1 - comma splice, 1- missing capital letter, 1- missing apostrophe, and 1- verb mistake:
When I was nineteen, I lived in Costa rica for a few months. This beautiful country is filled with fruits and flowers growing everywhere. The country is also blessed with rain forests, mountains, and inactive volcanoes. One of my favorite memories are of a time I stayed overnight on the beach with some friends. At about midnight, we decided to stand waist-deep in the warm ocean water. A gentle rain began to fall, we could see lightning flashing in the clouds miles away. Suddenly, we all gasped in amazement. Lines of flickering green light were dancing across the tops of the waves. As they rolled toward us. We learned later that the light was caused by tiny glowing animals which live on the oceans surface. That night was a magical time for us.
Please help!! I'm really bad at this.

Answer 1

Here you go!

When I was nineteen, I lived in Costa Rica for a few months. This beautiful country is filled with fruits and flowers growing everywhere. The country is also blessed with rain forests, mountains, and inactive volcanoes. One of my favorite memories is of a time I stayed overnight on the beach with some friends. At about midnight, we decided to stand waist-deep in the warm ocean water. A gentle rain began to fall. We could see lightning flashing in the clouds miles away. Suddenly, we all gasped in amazement. Lines of flickering green light were dancing across the tops of the waves as they rolled toward us. We learned later that the light was caused by tiny glowing animals which live on the ocean's surface. That night was a magical time for us.