Of what story can you show the paragraph??
250,000 is 254,920 rounded to the nearest 10,000
A. This intro sentence isn’t contributing to the body of the paragraph and doesn’t introduce the topic in a constructive manner, as should be done with all editorials. You must assume that the audience of your editorial doesn’t know anything about the topic you are going to convey.
I think its smells I'm not sure tho