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biodata, also known as biographical data, contains various informations about a person. It includes; name, career, achievements, aspirations...
Because it shows only what the narrator knows at any given point, it increases suspense and tension.
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<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
