Answer: In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.
For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.
Explanation:
"Mr. Carroll, do you know of any jobs we could do after school?" asked Fred.
Shanti means peace.
Basically, the word "Shanti" is in Hindi.
Answer:to explain where Anne came from
Explanation:
The author gives you an explanation of where she appears and when
