Tell the reader what your writing about to intrigue they
The answer is they have more questions in their mind at the end
This is a great start but add more detail, for example: You should go to Disneyland for your next holiday because of the great service. All the employees are super nice and the characters are super friendly. (**elaborate**)
I think the point of the relation of the quote to Atwood's poem is that what we see (or presume) and what we experience can be two totally different things. The poem talks about the striking differences between Canada as tourists see it and Canada as the speaker sees it through her own experience. For the tourists, <span>Saskatchewan is just another lake with "convenient" places to pose and take photos. For her, it is a very personal place of memories and meanings. In relation to the quote, we need to really meet our neighbors, instead of just believing the superficial images. We can really meet them through literature. By doing that, we will meet ourselves too, and realize the deep connection that binds us to other, different people and cultures.</span>
All of the above m.......m
