Answer:
Change now to "at the moment".
Explanation:
then or at the moment are good changes of now into reported speech.
Well to have a description I would well need the description first so if he was strong bulit had alot of musle square jaw would problly mean he was a strong person who didn't take orders from anyone <span />
Answer:
Yes. I'm agreed with you.
Answer:
Now I can see weve fallin apart
Every paragraph has to have an antecedent and an anecdote to go with it to keep the topic of the paragraph where it's supposed to be. So it doesn't turn into a run on paragraph <span />