The best revision of this sentence is the following:
The lawyer presented a clear argument to the jury (it was unbelievable how influenced they were by his case) in the hopes of winning the trial.
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Yield signs are red, white, and triangular. An upside down triangle that is.
"Receiving respect from others is important because it helps us to feel safe and to express ourselves. Respect means that you accept somebody for who they are, even when they're different from you or you don't agree with them. Respect in your relationships builds feelings of trust, safety, and wellbeing."
A disney character that I best relate to is.. Rapunzel! Rapunzel is adventorus! She has long blonde hair
