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Jobisdone [24]
3 years ago
10

How would I use temporal transition to revise the following paragraph?​

English
2 answers:
kupik [55]3 years ago
8 0
Just use transition words
MrRa [10]3 years ago
8 0

The answer is:

Yesterday evening, Darius went to the store because he wanted food. At that moment he met his teacher there, so they talked briefly about his latest project. Eventually, he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Transitions refer to words and phrases that provide cohesion, which means  they indicate how ideas relate within a text and take the reader from section to section. Temporal transitions signal:

frequency: <em>always, now and then</em>

duration: <em>for along time, during</em>

time: <em>at the moment, yesterday </em>

processes of time: <em>at first, meanwhile, finally</em>

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