Serious but not dark. show that you are trying hard to get your point across but not to hard. also, dont be so serious that you creep them out
Poet Kuangchi Chang did not remain in China long enough to be "re-educated." Following the Communist takeover he fled to the United States. His poem "Garden of My Childhood" describes China before the revolution as a peaceful, idyllic garden with a violent horde rapidly approaching. A vine, the wind, and the sea are each personified, and each beckons for him to run. It is not until "eons later," when he is "worlds away," that his "running is all done," and he finds himself at his destination: another garden, just like the one he had left behind. I recommend you rewrite this paragraph. So, not to be caught for plagiarism, please, check how this can be written by the experts at Primewriting site. | love these guys.
