The storm had suddenly come upon them, surprising the two boys. Their jackets offered little protection from the rain. Jack led the way to the cabin; it was almost hidden by the trees. Within minutes they stood on the porch. The door opened and they entered, throwing their backpacks on to the floor. They shivered; the room was cold. Worse, it was damp.
They could not see in the darkness, so Jack felt for the lantern, which he knew was on the table. If they had started out earlier, they would not have been caught in the rain and unable to reach the cabin before the night. A warm fire and supper would certainly help.
When the lantern was lit, Jack gasped. The doors to the cupboard, which his father had filled, were opened, revealing empty shelves. Walking back on to the porch, he stared at the empty place where wood had been stacked.
Obviously, someone had been warm and well-fed at their expense. Phil, he knew, would accept his apology. That was a small consolation for the uncomfortable night they would have. At lease a lesson had been learned; next time he would prepare for any emergency that might occur.
<em>Explanation and Suggested Steps: Writing</em>
1. Plan something about the struggles or challenges about working.
2. Then merge these ideas in a sentence and make it flow.
3. Remember to make it interesting, easy to read, and different.
4. Edit: Read again to make sure everything makes sense, check for grammar and punctuation, and look for any words to change.
5. Rewrite: After editing make sure it looks neat enough, and easy to follow along with.
<em>Example:</em>
Working can be a great, difficult, exciting experience for everyone. Working teaches and builds passion, patience, and pliability in everyone. It makes everyone understand and realise the real world. One of the hardest challenges of working can be fitting In. Figuring out how to be part of a new work culture can be frustrating at times, and being heard. It also takes time to gain the trust of coworkers to get them on board with your ideas, making mistakes, time management, slackers, disagreeable coworkers, office bullies, gossipers and trouble makers. Although some of us may differ we all still have our mistakes, struggles, and challenge.
That information doesn’t help at all actually because what if the patient is on the verge of dying it doesn’t help but being kind is a good deed because in the moment most people need a little sunshine and a smile
“They tied me up, then, plumb / amidships, back to the mast, lashed to the mast, / and took themselves again to rowing.”
