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Plzz help!! HOW CAN I PUT THIS INTO MY OWN WORDS? Canadian amateur geologist from New Brunswick who had only a grammar school education but became one of the first to
find a major type locality fro a very important Precambrian fossils the masterstrokes. He went by George Frederic Matthew
and he lived from 1837 1923. The theme of the biography could be that at the time he lived, during the latter part of the
Industrial Revolution, it was common for men to have wide interests and in fact his work was as a customs agent but he
became a very good amateur paleontologist by applying himself to that subject especially in the field. As well as describing
the Archaeology acadiense masterstrokes he also found many Cambrian fossils. This showed how it is not necessarily
formal training and being from a prosperous family that really determines how good a natural scientist is, but really how
passionate they are about their job
I NEED THIS TO GRADUATE!!

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I hope this is good enough, I tried to phrase it better and in different ways than the original. Some sounded confusing but I left it in just incase that was still an important part from the original..

George Frederic Matthew was a Canadian amateur geologist from New Brunswick. Matthew only had a grammar school education but soon became one of the first to find a major type locality from many important Precambrian fossils. George Matthew lived from the years 1837 to 1923.
The biography theme may be about the time where he lived during the latter part of the Industrial Revolution. This is as it was common for men to have wide interests. Matthew’s work was as a customs agent but later on he would become an amateur paleontologist from applying himself to the subject, especially in the paleontologist field. He had also found many Cambrian fossils which described the Archaeology acadiense masterstrokes. The founding of these fossils showed how it was not necessarily formal training and the being from a wealthy and prosperous family that would determine how good a natural scientist is, but would be from how passionate one is about their own job.