What do u mean by correctly written. I will help u then
7. The best time to plant flower seeds, of course, is just before a rainy season, not in the middle of a hot dry summer.
8. Our neighbor, Miss Allen, manages two apartment houses.
9. As a matter of fact, most horses can run four miles without having to stop.
10. The Comanches, like many nomadic tribes, once traveled throughout Kansas, New Mexico, Texas, and Oklahoma.
I wasn't sure about number 6.
Hope this helps,
Davinia.
The second one, it has a capital letter and a full stop which is needed.
I left my SUITCASE in airport security
I accidentally took the receptionist pin while filling out papers at the INFORMATION DESK
I had to miss REHEARSAL because I got detention
All u have to do is put these words into sentences it might help if I u actually know what the words mean
I believe that the message the author is trying to convey in this excerpt is that humans need to take action to end further destruction of the natural environment, because if they don't, more and more species will disappear.