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1. I suggest ending the "A time l got a great Victory was in Florida" Ending the sentence and starting a new one. Any number below ten should be written out. (Three not 3) Comma after so. And add apostrophe. (So, when we advanced to the championship it wasn't really easy.) Last sentence needs to be redefined. Does not make sense to say "we scored ended"?
2. Add spaces. (Obviously) How do you quietly storm out of a room? The adjectives do not make sense. He started to own? I suggest finding a better word.
3. Again, anything under ten needs to be written out. Confused by what this sentence means, "We had been going to a store to get some clothes in Greenbelt, and on the Beltway." Instead of 1 week and a half say a week and a half. I suggest saying the arm I broke, instead of that arm. Very good otherwise!!
4. I suggest cutting out everything that said you could not think of a triumph. It just confused the reader. The punctuation is also bad. Add more commas and get rid of the run-on sentences.
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The BFG is unlike other giants and believes that giants should not eat humans. He has formed a close friendship with Sophie and wants to help her because he does not want her, or others like her, to get hurt. His affection for humans has only intensified since becoming friends with Sophie.Jul 22, 2020
Explanation:
Sports can be a hobby. A hobby is something your really good at. Something you enjoy and are good at. Sewing, drawing, different types of sports, sking, etc. Those are all hobbies. So once again, a sport CAN be a hobby.
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