The paragraph is beyond choppy and uncomfortable to read because of it. There are too many short sentences and not enough complex ones, making it hard to follow any kind of flow the paragraph has the potential to offer. Because there were no transitions of any kind, it was hard to try and smoothly combine topics. For example, the first two sentences seem abrupt and confusing standing on their own like that. The narrator went from loving swimming to randomly speaking about the beach, and it was hard to follow until you got to the end of the second sentence, understanding then where the connection was between the two. It is hard to even figure out if the paragraph is about swimming or about the beach, and nothing was incorporated smoothly.
There are tons of things to do at local beaches, and people should spend more time at them instead of hanging out indoors all day. The beach offers a place to develop strong swimming skills, and learning to swim is one of my happiest childhood memories. I am glad I learned to swim at the beach.
Rearranging the way beaches and a love for swimming were introduced allow for it to be more easy to understand.
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While the Revolutionary period still carried widespread beliefs of Christianity, they valued science along with reasoning. This was because of the influence of the enlightenment and new scientific theories and probabilities introduced into the modern world of religion and science. Meanwhile, the Puritans tended to lean towards traditional beliefs or points of view that are accepted with unthinking conventional reverence. During the revolutionary period ideas were opened rather than shunned away when discredited by religion.
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A. He knows that he is vulnerable and can die in war.
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He realizes that if he has the mark "Achilles mark" that even though he will be able to out-battle is opponents, the mark keeps him alive as long as no one finds the mark, which will fatally kill him at the end.
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