This conclusion lacks to specify the adventures Merri had and the countries in which they were lived.
Explanation:
There is no evidence that Merri really is an adventurer so that the above text is really a conclusion, for this reason it is necessary to add specific experiences about the adventures that Merri lived, thus showing the place where these adventures took place.
In other words, we can say that the conclusion lacks specificity and shows no real adventures so that we can conclude that Merri is really an adventurer.
