start with a thesis statement on the topic. then put three topic sentences on that thesis in the first paragraph. your body paragraphs will be about each topic. then you final paraggraph restates the thesis and the topics.
Answer:3
Explanation: Harlem is redundant and the draft is wordy beyond need.
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NO CHANGE
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Read it aloud and you'll see (or hear) why.
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