Question

Which revision of the sentence corrects the faulty parallelism?

Answer 1

Answer:

B. Mr. Foss showed more pride in being a manager than in being a father.

Explanation:

Took the test.

Answer 2

Answer:

Mr. Foss showed more pride in being a manager than in being a father.

Explanation:

In parallelism, throughout the sentence, the structure should sound similar. So when it says "pride in being a manager", and "than in being a father," they sound similar. Hope this helps :)