Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Science gives you good problem solving skills and teaches you to be sceptical and know when to trust evidence. If you do science there are lots of jobs available to you that otherwise might not be because these skills and maths and explaining skills are useful in many jobs
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<span>In Throwing Fire, historian Alfred W. Crosby looks at hard, accurate throwing and the manipulation of fire as unique human capabilities. Humans began throwing rocks in prehistory and then progressed to javelins, atlatls, bows and arrows. We learned to make fire by friction and used it to cook, drive game, burn out rivals, and alter landscapes to our liking. Our exploitation of these two capabilities figured in the extinction of many species, and may have played a role in the demise of Neanderthals.
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Answer:
B. A conflict between the boy and the girl
Explanation:
A conflict in a story is a barrier or hurdle between two characters in the story that must be overcome for the plot to move to a conclusive end. In the story titled 'Araby', there is a conflict between the boy and Mangan's sister.
He has an attraction for her which he tries to convey. His efforts at this can be seen in his willingness to go all the way to the bazaar to purchase something nice for the girl at her request. He also battled with his internal feelings whenever he saw the girl.
