When I was 13 I had a dog as a birthday present it was a girl and we named her coco. She went everywhere with me we did everything together by the time I was 16 she was old and slowed down and we thought that was from old age. Coco had brain cancer we didn’t know what to do and we went to every vet in our state but nothing was helping. Coco pushed in for another two years till she passed.
I was so upset and devastated that I didn’t want another pet again but I got another dog a Great Dane named Sham rock he’d love coco they would fit in perfectly. Sham rock was the dog that brought me to love animals again and why I’m think about being a veterinarian when I grow up.
The best example of a thesis statement is the following: "Funding for breast cancer should remain higher than the funding of other cancers because much of the funding is privately raised, the resulting research has proven beneficial for advancing the treatment of other cancers, and public support will demand the maintenance of current funding" (C).
A good thesis statement should be one sentence containing clearly:
- the <u>main idea of the essay or paper</u>;
- the <u>conclusion</u> you will be reaching as an answer to this question;
- and, potentially, a summary of the <u>thread of ideas you will be developing</u> to come to this conclusion.
In statement C, the thesis is expressed directly and the author explains why this argument is important: current levels of research about breast cancer funding should at least be maintained, and prioritized over other forms of cancer, because this specific research helps us learn more about other cancers and how to treat them.
The author also adds an element which will appear in the development of ideas (the main body of the paper): the fact that the public opinion supports current breast cancer research funding levels.
