I think that the tone of Orwell’s essay progressively changes. In the beginning of the essay, Orwell’s tone is almost lecturing, telling us what’s wrong with the English language and how to fix.
Brandon enthusiastically told Sara, that the play was incredible.
Explanation:
This is incorrect because a comma is used to separate clauses or two main ideas. In this case, that is not true. The sentence should not contain a comma since the sentence is one idea.