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<span>To whom it may concern;</span>
<span> In</span><span> regards to the Memorial Day fiasco, while you are aboard your cruise ship Star Princess. We would first like to offer our sincere apology for our part in the mishap. We do not plan on taking legal action against you or the Moroccan authorities, we are requesting an apology in English, this time from both parties to avoid another Waterloo. Captain Johnson may just want to remember a few key items.</span>
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What's the sentence? if you give me the sentence I'll come back and answer your question
They're biggest mistake was going through ice but they ended up having another problem which was how cold it was but they over came the cold by wearing alot of layers of clothes they also took all the wet clothes off very fast and had hot drinks often the last problem they had was drifting ice pans which could collide causing walls of ice to ride out of nowhere or to break apart throwing them into the freezing Waters far away.
I believe it’s false the definition of connotative is using an implication or making a association