Answer:
There joined with her in these opinions a brother of hers, one Mr. Wheelwright, a sometimes silenced minister in England
Explanation:
An excerpt from John Winthrop’s A History of New England that revealed Winthrop’s writing style and the structure of his journal is there joined with her in these opinions a brother of hers, one Mr. Wheelwright, a sometimes silenced minister in England.
John Winthrop who was born between January 12, 1587/88 and died on March 26, 1649 at the age of 61 was an English Puritan lawyer and one of the foremost figures in founding the Massachusetts Bay Colony, which is the second major settlement in New England after Plymouth Colony. Winthrop led the first large wave of colonizers from England in the year 1630 and served as governor for 12years out of the colony's first 20 years. His writings and vision of the colony as a Puritan "city upon a hill" control New England colonial development, influencing the governments and religions of neighboring or nearest colonies.
How could a change in emphasis BEST develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?
A) The author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff.
B) The author could shorten details about McKee's preparations and give more details about the rocket flight and the adventures that took place during colonization of Saturn.
C) The author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with plenty of intricate technical detail.
D) The author could focus the story solely on McKee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.
