Read the excerpt from the body paragraph of an argumentative essay about entrepreneurs and free enterprise. In a free enterprise
system, companies can become more successful by beating their competitors in service and pricing. Mary Kay Ash’s innovative business plan used her reduced costs and her loyal, home-based sales team to beat the competition at providing cosmetics to American women. Why is this excerpt an example of a strong argument?
Any type of writing which presents a strong argument always develops its ideas including relevant data and facts about the topic. This is a way to support the argument, and makes it coherent and clear to understand. This excerpt is an example of a strong argument because it includes relevant information about what were Mary Kay Ash's techniques to beat her competition and succeed in her business.
