Write about a good experience you've had recently and how that experience was special to you, include a message in it. Half a page to a page should do. After you're done looking over it, make that message in your story that you want to convey the theme and the reasons behind it. I can't write this for you since I don't know who you are, but you know who you are.
He either talked too much or said nothing at all- correct
nothing troubled her except...-incorrect
whenever the dogs in the kennel appeared...- correct
i have often noticed...- correct
sometimes students who have attended...- correct
I hope this helps these sentences were rather confusing to me to be honest.
Antinous states this to Telemachus in The book 'The Odyssey'.
1.location 2.weather 3.housing 4.transportation