Major conflict. Ellen continually suffers abuse by her neglectful caretakers and searches for a stable home and loving family. rising action. Ellen is placed in a number of temporary homes, all of which are unhappy, and she longs for a home where she is loved and cared for.
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Assuming that you want to fix the vague sentence, it would be better if the sentence is like this :
The school computers arrived with preloaded games. These were the second batch that the school had received
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The sentence is imperative meaning the subject is (you)