I told them to describe what happens and if they aren’t honest I would try to ask them or one time when my mom said she didn’t smoke
Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
The answer is "a<span>dverb clause"
have a great day!!!
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Explanation:
she uses experiences from her own life