In three sentences, critique the following paragraph. Explain where it could be improved. Then, in your own words, rewrite the p
aragraph to make its writing stronger. Make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and a topic sentence. Use correct spelling and grammar. "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening offers more than a way for kids to have fun. There are many things to gain from working with plants outside. It is unfortunate that many people feel too busy to garden. More people should take a chance with gardening to see what they can create."
I think that Hellen Keller was a very loud and outspoken person for someone her age and with her conditions. My thought about this is that it is what she uses to try and comunicate with other people to make sure that they would still notice her.
