Well it all depends on what you're writing about. When you write your rough draft think about the feeling it gives when reading it over. Then if it feels right, give it a go. This might not help much but think about how you feel while reading it.
The firefighters would pass buckets to each other to extinguish the blaze. ... On October 9, 1871 the infamous "Chicago Fire" killed 300 people, but there was an even more tragic fire that same day that killed 1200 ... What is the Star of Life?
Answer:
writing makes you smarter!
Explanation:
practice writing, u will improve with time!! i know i didn't tho -.-