Answer:
Describing captain Nemo below in details.
Explanation:
Nemo is a bit of a strange duck, a man with a brilliant scientific genius but a loner. He appreciates being isolated so much that he captained and crafted a submarine that trolled the sea deep underneath its exterior. Yet, he's a man who understands what he understands, affirming at one point, ''I am not what you ask an enlightened man!''
I see nothing wrong with your writing. It’s really good all I would do to make it better is to find synonyms for the basic words in there.
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