-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
The boy wanted to buy an orange for the girl he liked but he didn't have enough money so then he laid the money he did have on the counter plus an orange he had with him in the end the shopkeeper let him have th orange.
Explanation:
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Primary resource means when it come directly from the person who witness the situation for example in a court Room there’s a typer who types every word that’s being said in the court room
In a negative way they will focus on scandals of that sports personality as bad people and this will ruin their reputation and this will influence people not to trust or believe in what there doing.
