For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
"They promised bills and laws in favor of immigrants in exchange for votes" is the one way among the following choices given in the question that <span>political machines, such as Tammany Hall, work with and for immigrants. The correct option among all the options that are given in the question is the second option. </span>
Answer:
A) Grandma enjoys listening to the thunder roar.
Explanation:
Personification is the attribution of a personal nature or human characteristics to something nonhuman.
Hope this helps!
What is the sentence? we need more information in order to answer this question.
