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Radda [10]
4 years ago
5

Guys is this essay good?

English
2 answers:
lutik1710 [3]4 years ago
5 0
I personally think you did a great job by adding in all the details. I would just add a bit more facts about how we honor the holiday
andre [41]4 years ago
3 0
I like your essay. Maybe you can fix a lot of your run on sentences. I noticed I kept having to take breathes where there wasn't a comma or a period.
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