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Rom4ik [11]
3 years ago
8

hey can someone read a short story i had to write and help me identify the tone and how to make the tone more clear?

English
2 answers:
GREYUIT [131]3 years ago
3 0
When you decide to write<span> something for a specific audience, you often </span>know<span> instinctively what </span>tone<span> of voice </span>will<span> be </span>most<span> appropriate for that audience: serious</span>
Alex17521 [72]3 years ago
3 0
I will. I can just edit my answer after I read the short story and tell you what I think the tone is. 
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