Dialogue a narrator historical material characters with strong feelings
Answer:
It was a beautiful day lemonade so sweet, probably not good for your teeth. The sun was shining, just a little bit of mist on the other side of the wall. As I'm lying down relaxing with the warm sun on my skin until a shrill cry echoed in the fog, I was only 15 at the time. I had no idea what I was about to get myself into.
As I stand up, I feel the cold mist breathe across my skin. Suddenly It's dark in the blink of an eye, everyone and everything was gone. The warm sun turned cold, everything around me was depressing. A little bit of sunlight still left, I see chase and Anika running after a faint shadow I assume is Marilyn. Left in the dust with nothing but fear, I start yelling at them to wait up. Filled with questions I run as fast as my feet can carry me up to them.
I see them climb over the wall, Hesitant at first I look back, then lookup. As I make my way up the wall, climbing on vines. I can't think of anything. I'm just climbing, thoughtlessly climbing up a wall I had no idea what was over. As I get to the top I hear Chase start yelling my name, as I look over the wall I'm frozen with fear. I see something unbelievable.
(I hope this helps, feel free to change anything!)
Answer:
B
Explanation:
This statement is fluff because it says very little or nothing at all that is useful to the passage. It is clear from reading the names of the additives that they are chemicals, but it is even more unnecessary to say that they sound scary. This opinion does not add any substance to the piece and is distracting since at most it expresses the opinion of the author and at worse results in a disjointed description.
C, because fiction writing is typically not based on anything true
