… (6) These students should be exempt from taking the final exam because they have already demonstrated responsibility and dedic
ation, they know the material, and most importantly they feel that other students will likely be inspired to achieve the ultimate honor-roll goal.7) Primarily, honor-roll students should be exempt from taking the final exam because they are responsible and dedicated. (8) These students have stayed on task, going out of their way to turn in a job well done. (9) Sometimes, they sacrifice by staying up late to finish homework assignments. (10) As one honor-roll student recalled, “One time, I stayed up literally all night so that I could finish a project. (11) The problem was not finishing it but making sure that it would come out perfect; it did.” Sentence 8 needs to be revised to provide more sentence variety in the paragraph. What is the best way to revise sentence 8?
1) The job has gone out of the way to stay on task and benefit these students.
2) Honor-roll students have stayed on task, going out of their way to turn in a job well done.
3) Staying on task, these students have gone out of their way to turn in a job well done.
4) These students have done a good job and gone out of the way to stay on task.
