Where is the story can you show me?
It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
Answer:
I woke up from a dream where I was zip-lining through the Amazon. I remembered my mum (who is from Texas) saying "Tiger Woods is your daddy." It was odd but kind of fun. I looked over to my left and I saw my little brother's Teddy Bear. I slid off my bed and looked out the window as I always do. I didn't recognize the scenery, though. "We're not in Kansas anymore," I muttered under my breath. Outside I saw the Eiffel Tower. We're in Paris.
Unfazed, I took a bath and changed clothes. I had plans to have breakfast at Tiffany's. To get to Tiffany's, I had to go jogging through Coconut Grove. Once I arrived, I gave Tiffany a hug and smelled the food cooking. The breakfast was weird, just like my dream. Tiffany's mum prepared Mahi Francaise with a side of garlic hummus. Again, weird. But pretty delicious. Then, I woke up. Oh, it was all just a dream.
Explanation:
This is the best I could come up with. XD It's horrible but the words/phrases are...very weird.
Answer:
I remember taking this quiz.
The answer is <u>"the inner conflicts of a character".</u>
Explanation:
The inner conflicts of a character can contain flashbacks and historical facts, so it doesn't necassarily mean there is going to be action or excitement, because you're just recalling a memory, not reinacting it.
<em>Hope i helped, have a nice day ;3</em>