On the question above there's two boxes that you left unchecked, based on what those say give Lizzy suggestions on what she could do better in her personal narrative.
Answer:
1. I'm sure it'll be <u>a</u> winner.
2. I think you <u>will</u> agree, it's <u>an</u> interesting and creative idea.
3. They're bound to appeal <u>to</u> the audience.
4. We think it <u>has</u> tremendous potential.
5. We think our concept is great and hope we've been able to persuade <u>to (take out)</u> you, too.
7. <u>What</u> is our target market?
Explanation:
Email is a quick and professional way to communicate. It is a common communication technique and nearly anyone has it for professional purposes, such as work or school.
The hockey team coveted the first-place trophy that was awarded last year to their arch rivals. To covet something means to want it with great desire. Therefore, this team would want the trophy that their arch rivals won last year.
