The best answer for this question would be:
<span>The paragraph is choppy and in need of transitions.
It lacks the transitions needed in the passage. It doesn't flow right, and the topic jumps from one another making it a confusing passage to read. </span>
Frederick Douglass wrote an autobiographical slave narrative.
It was a good day for ice cream.
Because it is punctuated, has a subject and the meaning is the clearest out of those three.
The first and last sentences are not complete.
