I'm assuming we have to correct it:
In the wilderness, I find some more deer.
Answer: limit the number of details you provide to the most important and compelling ones.
Alienate is synonymous to separate. So it will alienate them from the group
Answer:
i'll try and be back
Edit:
I am beyond mad. How can she deny me an opportunity as big as this one. Millions thoughts go through my mind. Should I disobey? Should I go anyways? No, that isn't right. But I really just want to know why! Is she envious of my success? Or maybe she doesn't want to see me happy?
