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In general, celebrities usually decide what is “in” and what is “out”. But like these fads, celebrities are fleeting and come and go with their voice or their prettyboy faces. This teaches our generation that the only way to fit in is to be attractive and buy expensive clothes, which is a hopeless endeavor, is one of the leading causes of depression in our youth, along with the social media, which is also dominated by the world’s celebrities.
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Honestly no it doesnt count as literate if it has spelling mistakes, like if you were spelling "then" but it was written as "tehn" it really makes you lose ur focus on the poem writing essay