-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
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Appalachia is at the eastern part of United States know for its music and being the origin of country, old-time, bluegrass and folk music. It's characteristics dated back to (1) African (and African-American) music, (2) traditional music from Ireland and Scotland and (3) English ballads. The music today, is a hybrid of different influences from East to West.
Answer:
The house on mango street
Explanation:
Esperanza already understands some of the gender disparity in her society, but for now it is innocent and confined to her siblings. Her desire for a best friend “of her own” is an early incarnation of her goal of autonomy. More images of flying will recur later, as symbol of an escape through beauty or physically leaving Mango Street.
