Looks Great! A few critiques...
In paragraph 1 i think you spelled socialize wrong.
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if so, try using this to write you essays next time...
K-key idea
E- evidence -1
A- analyze evidence( give your thoughts
T-transition-( i.e.- Continuing on,
E- Evidence -2
A- analyze evidence
L- link the paragraph all together
it really helps to keep everything organized and consistent. For your introduction, try using a hook, a bridge , and finally a thesis. A thesis should ALWAYS be the last sentence in your intro paragraph.
For your conclusion start of with your thesis, go into your Main ideas of the essay, and then give something for the reader to think about (clincher)
Hopefully this helped!!
Mnemonics are used to help you remember something
I got C. Which is, "It's a hot night. I disremember any sich weather before on the Bar."
Answer:
D preposition
Explanation:
preposition shows location
to , from , in
