"I was the first 'welcome-to-our-state' Floridian ... " (paragraph 3)
Hope this help.
While you are proofreading the text for grammar mistakes, you could evaluate the text by asking yourself the following questions.
What is the main idea?
What is the writer trying to say?
What rhetorical devices does the author use?
Did the writer organize his essay so that the reader will not be confused?
Was the writer able to bring about his point?
Did the introduction help start off the essay?
Did the writer conclude appropriately?
Did the writer use appropriate transitions to link ideas?
It will be hard evaluating and proofreading an essay at the same time as humans cannot multitask. I suggest doing them both separately.
Aim to keep everything factual and based on reality
Answer:
A German priest of the 1600s, Athanasius Kircher, wrote the first grammar and vocabulary of Coctic, the language of Christian Egypt.
Explanation:
I believe it would be judgemental. Hope this helps :)
