<span>a heroic epic
HVE GREAT DAY </span>
God this is breathtaking and painful to read at the same time. It’s beautiful let me tell you. I think everything is good but you could make it so much better. The writing is out of focus in some sentences and the ideas seem to jump around. You need a constant structure through the whole story. For example:
“Some deal with emotional, mental, and even physical disturbances within one self. When I was only 16 years of age, two days after my birthday in the year 2002 I found myself saddened by my grandmother’s death. The doctor told my family members and me that grandma wasn’t going to make it through and recover like we had thought. What seems saddening is that I was the last person to know of this horrendous news. I suppose my family was trying to protect me by shielding my eyes to the truth of the matter.”
This is a small fracture of your story but transformed in a way that the ideas flow more smoothly. If you want me to keep editing this story for you I’d be happy to help :)
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sorry i cant see your question please
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1. The point of view in the giver is a limited third person point of view.
"As he approached the summit of the hill at last....He was not warmer; if anything, he felt...more cold...But, he began, suddenly, to feel happy....."
2. " He couldn’t see why it was necessary. He liked the feeling of safety here in this warm and quiet room; he liked the expression of trust on the woman’s face as she lay in the water unprotected, exposed, and free." Shows his rebellious side
"He heard people singing. Behind him, across vast distances of space and time, from the place he had left, he thought he heard music too. But perhaps it was only an echo." Shows the idea that in this place he can be whoever he wants to be.
3.When the main character, Jonas, reacts to the news that his father will soon be releasing a twin is an example of dramatic irony. The Reader begins to suspect that 'release' is a euphemism for death, but when Jonas's father is put in the position of release a twin newborn, Jonas imagines where he might go: 'he had wondered what lay Elsewhere. Was there someone there, waiting, who would receive the tiny released twin? Would it grow up Elsewhere, not knowing, ever, that in this community lived a being who looked exactly the same?''
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