In the third paragraph I think you should change your first sentence to "Not everyone learns the same way. Understanding you cant force someone to learn a specific way is the key to helping many kids. Learning is necessary to set us up for the real world, but the real world isent forcing you to do something you cant. " I think having a shorter topic sentence makes it easier to understand. You do not have to agree with my constructive critism, but I think listening to it will make your writing better
Answer: a. Failure is everywhere. It's just that most of the time we'd rather avoid confronting that fact.
Explanation:
Oliver Burkeman believes that the way to true happiness is not to think so positively all the time that we forget about the negative parts of life. He believes the humans do this often even though they can see failure on the horizon, they still go ahead and do things with a hope that things will work out due to that unwarranted positivity.
He believes that failure is everywhere but people just want to avoid that fact because it is not something that they want to admit can happen.
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The first syllable is the function to an adjective:D Hope I helped
Answer:
D) Most people figured that Columbus discovered America, made friends with the Indians, and then told everyone else about this land.
Explanation:
Revision of any text or passage is need for a number of reasons, ranging from a simple grammar mistake to making the paper more precise, focused, structured, etc. The revision also allows for improved analytical skills, challenging one's own ideas, more strengthened argument, etc.
Among the given sentences, the one that needs to be revised is sentence D. Looking at the words used in this particular sentence, it is evident that the words are too informal, be it using<em> "most people figured", "made friends", or "told everyone else"</em>. They make the sentence too simple, too friendly, something one does with a close friend or relative. If these words are revised with words like 'most people believed', 'formed close relationship/ befriended', or 'revealed to everyone', then that makes the sentence seem more formal.
Thus, the correct answer is option D.