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lys-0071 [83]
3 years ago
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Can someone fix the grammar and the punctuation of the sentence plz

English
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Sveta_85 [38]3 years ago
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Answer:

I like that the film version tells the story better for Jim Valentine because in the film we can get a better idea of what the characters look like. The film version gives us something that we can’t experience in a book like emotions and facial expressions. For example, when the character is in a sad scene you can’t see how they react in a book but the film, you can see how they react. Also the picture of the setting we can hear how the music goes. With the play, the lighting will get darker and in the emotional scenes and get brighter and a happy scene. The scenes are best portrayed in the film. In the text, you can't hear their tone or you can’t see the setting or the characteristics of the character. In conclusion, the film version is better at telling the story of Jim Valentine because it gives us a better picture of the story.

Explanation:

i hope this helps i revised it a bit added puctuations comas and fixed run on sentences

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