He was a little boy, say the decorations and things Han
the _______________________________________, a ______________________________
boy, too, say the ____________________________ , but not a
boy for _____________________________, say the ____________________________
on the _______________________________________.
He was a __________________________, say the ______________________________
on the _____________________________________________________________________,
___________________________________ say he was
___________________________________, and his _________________________________
say he was always ____________________________________
_________________________________ they say.
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He was a kid, says the size of the jackets hung up in the closet,
The brown shutter blinds, say he likes his sleep,
The large dresser, says he has a lot of clothes,
The large glass of water, says he easily gets thirsty,
a Lazy kid too, says the piles of dirty clothes on the floor,
But one that dislikes the dark, says the bright lamp,
A music lover though, says the nice headphones still plugged-in,
he is someone who plays the trumpet, says the trumpet case and music book on the floor,
Dirty with dust, the clock says he does not like to be late,
But not a patient, boy says the ipad and ipod on the dresser,
The mini stick under the bed, says he likes hockey,
The hockey stick says he plays hockey,
But, came first place in a hockey tournament, says the large trophy in the closet,
A boy that likes hockey, says the 500 hockey cards in the small cardboard box still waiting for another,
Something went wrong, says the cracked mirror hanging on the wall,
they had to leave in a hurry, they say.
The sentence Fatima's teacher will most likely ask her to revise is "Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter."
<h3>What does Fatima need to revise?</h3>
To revise a text, we must pay attention to anything that stands out as lacking cohesion or coherence, any unnecessary repetitions, or any mistakes that may prevent readers from understanding the idea.
After reading Fatima's paragraph, we can see that there is one sentence repeating the same idea about the previous year twice: "Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter." This sentence sounds too informal, since it is acceptable in colloquial speech to repeat ideas as we talk.
However, written language should be more formal and grammatically accurate. For that reason, it is likely that Fatima's teacher will ask her to revise the sentence above in order to remove the repetition.
With the information above in mind, we can conclude that the first answer choice is the correct option.
This is the complete question with the missing answer choices:
Read Fatima’s paragraph.
Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter. At first, the snow twirled gently, lightly dusting the street, cars, and trees with snowy frosting. Then, the snow became a curtain, blinding my view so that I felt cocooned from the outside world. When the snow stopped, ice coated the trees and branches clacked like chαttering teeth.
Which sentence will Fatima’s teacher most likely ask her to revise?
- Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter.
- At first, the snow twirled gently, lightly dusting the street, cars, and trees with snowy frosting.
- Then, the snow became a curtain, blinding my view so that I felt cocooned from the outside world.
- When the snow stopped, ice coated the trees and branches clacked like chαttering teeth.
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The answer would definitely be B. " oxens' "
In the short story "The Glass of Milk" by Manuel Rojas, the boy sees the sea as a representation of freedom. The boy looks out to the sea often because he is free to do and travel as he please. In contrast to the sea, the writer describes the great city as "... a place of slavery: stale, dark, without the grand sweep of the sea; among its high walls and narrow streets people lived and died bewildered by agonizing drudgery.
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